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The chart below shows the population of three cities in 1990 and the estimation for 2000 and the actual population growth in the year 2000.

The chart below shows the population of three cities in 1990 and the estimation for 2000 and the actual population growth in the year 2000. mbepK
The given bar graph depicts the number of people living in these 3 towns in 1990 and the Predication for 2000 as well as the genuine rise in number of citizens in 2000 In 1990, the highest people were lived in the San Paolo, which was 23 millions. Whereas, Shangi had 13 millions population. It was lowest in the year 1991. 18 millions of residents were lived in a Jakarta. Focus on the details of the year 2000, firstly, San Paolo had estimate the populace were 27 millions, but 24 millions true residents were lived. Secondly, 17. 5 millions people were habituated in Jakarta; however, assessed population were 20. 0 millions. Thirdly, Shangi had 14. 0 millions of genuine citizens, which was 2 millions less than it's evaluated inhabitants. Overall, San Paolo was the most popular for living. On the other hand, Shangi was the least favoured by man kind.
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living in these 3 towns in 1990 and the Predication for 2000
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were
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in the San Paolo, which was 23
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Shangi
had 13
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population. It was lowest in the year 1991. 18
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of residents were
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in a Jakarta.

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of the year 2000,
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, San Paolo had estimate the populace were 27
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,
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24
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true residents were
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had 14. 0
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of genuine citizens, which was 2
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less than it's evaluated inhabitants.

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was the least
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the population of three cities in 1990 and the estimation for 2000 and the actual population growth in the year 2000.

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