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value of one country's exports

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The chart and table illustrated the value and its percentage change of one country's exports in different categories during 2015 and 2016, respectively. From the chart, we can see that about 60 billion dollars export earnings had been made per year in both petroleum products and engineered goods during those two years. At that time, 40 billion dollars had been earned from the export of gems and jewellery. However, only about 30 billion dollars value goods had been exported annually in either agricultural products or textiles simultaneously. As shown in the table, the only category, in which the annual value of export had gone down in 2016 compared with 2015, is gems and jewellery, by 5. 18 percent. What's more, export value had increased by 15. 25 percent and 8. 5 percent in textiles and engineered goods, respectively. Nevertheless, the earnings from export had grown only a little bit, by 0. 81 percent, in agricultural products. Higher export earnings rise had been made in petroleum products, by 3 percent. To sum up, export earnings had increased in four categories and decreased in one category, in 2016 compared with 2015.

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