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The line graph delineates gym membership trends by gender from 1980 to 2010.

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The line graph delineates gym membership trends by gender from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it's clear that the changes in membership were quite varied depending on time and genders. It's also worth noting that the number of male gym members were higher than that of females most of the given period. The number of male gym members started at 2000 in 1980, which was more than double that of females in the same year. Over the next 5 years, both male and female memberships increased sharply to double their original numbers. After that, the figures for male membership followed a series of wild fluctuations, dropping to a low of 1800 members from 1993 to 2000 then reaching a peak at more than 5000 members in 2005. In the following five year period (in the next 5 years) male gym membership experienced a significant decline, falling to about 500 members in 2010. Similarly, female gym membership also saw a number of mild fluctuations while increasing gradually, reaching two peaks at about 3000 members in 1995 and 2008 respectively. Subsequently, the rising trend for women gym members slowed down to finish at merely under 2000 members in 2010.

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