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The pie chart describes initial jobs of Anthropology did after graduating from higher education, while the table illustrates how much they were paid in work after a half of a decade. Overall, most of people tended to do a full-time job and those who worked for government sector and freelance consultants had the highest salary. Turning to the first chart, the people who had full-time job accounted for more than a half and the proportion of those did part-time job was in three times lower than the former. In contrast, the percentage of postgraduates who chose both working and studying were in the lowest with 5%. People who were unemployed earned over 10%, which was the third highest group of human after finishing their degree course. With regard to full-time studying or those have not decided about career by far lower than full-time workers, at 8% respectively. After 5 years work, the employees in private company had the highest income around 25, 000 to 49, 999 dollars, but the figure for being paid more than 100, 000 dollars was in the lowest, at 30%. Working for two others company, the government workers and freelancer accounted for 80% on being paid from 75, 000 dollars to more than 100, 000.

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