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eating sweet food produces acid in mouth.

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The line graph indicates the trends of acid level after consumption of different types of sugar. The overall direction of each lines intimates an increasing level of pH at the end of the experiment. Cane sugar has a dramatic decline in pH level after five minutes. It has the lowest pH level among all types of sugar, reaching a peak point of pH level at 3. 5. While, honey has the highest pH level after it was consumed for five minutes. Honey takes the least time to reach pH 7, on the contrary, cane sugar takes the most time to reach the neutral level of pH. Fruit sugar exceeds the pH level of honey at the minutes of ten. Indeed, both fruit sugar and cane sugar manifest gradual rise in pH level as time passes by. All three types of sugar had a great fall in acid level after eaten for five minutes. However, all of them remains steady pH level after 40 minutes.
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of pH at the
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Cane
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has a dramatic decline in pH
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after five minutes. It has the lowest pH
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among all types of
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, reaching a peak point of pH
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at 3. 5. While, honey has the highest pH
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after it
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for five minutes. Honey takes the least time to reach pH 7,
on the contrary
, cane
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sugar
takes the most time to reach the neutral
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level
of pH. Fruit
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exceeds the pH
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of honey at the minutes of ten.
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, both fruit
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sugar
and cane
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manifest gradual rise in pH
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as time passes by.

All three types of
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had a great fall in acid
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after eaten for five minutes.
However
, all of them remains steady pH
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after 40 minutes.
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IELTS academic eating sweet food produces acid in mouth.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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