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The line graph contain information about the price in dollars of a barrel of oil from 2005 with future predication to 2025.

The line graph contain information about the price in dollars of a barrel of oil from 2005 with future predication to 2025. kbYdW
The line graph provides information on how much a barrel of oil cost(in dollars) in 2005 with estimation until 2025. Overall, it's clear from the chart that the rate of oil has increased over the two-decade time period. In the beginning, in 2005 oil sold for 20 dollars with a slight peak at about 25 dollars a barrel in 2008. There was a drop to reach a low point of around 16 dollars a barrel in 2010. Significant growth is seen within six years( 2010-2016) leading to the difference in the rate of 35 dollars. There witnessed a sharp rise to 120 dollars a barrel by 2020. It is projected that the price of oil will climb to roughly 128 dollars in 2025.
The line graph provides information on how much a
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of
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oil
cost(in
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in 2005 with estimation until 2025.
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clear
from the chart that the rate of
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oil
has increased over the two-decade time period. In the beginning, in 2005
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oil
sold for 20
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dollars
with a slight peak at about 25
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a
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barrel
in 2008. There was a drop to reach a low point of around 16
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dollars
a
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barrel
in 2010. Significant growth is
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seen
within six years
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(
2010-2016) leading to the difference in the rate of 35
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dollars
. There witnessed a sharp rise to 120
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dollars
a
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barrel
by 2020. It
is projected
that the price of
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oil
will climb to roughly 128
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dollars
in 2025.
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IELTS academic The line graph contain information about the price in dollars of a barrel of oil from 2005 with future predication to 2025.

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