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The graphs illustrate the amount of household water used in five nations in Europe and North America and the price of water in each country.

The graphs illustrate the amount of household water used in five nations in Europe and North America and the price of water in each country. MBMXe
The graphs illustrate the amount of household water used in five nations in Europe and North America and the price of water in each country. It is evident that the cost of water in the US was the lowest while the figures for Germany and France are by far the highest. Therefore, the Americans use the largest amount of water compared to the remaining nations. As can be seen from the first chart, the price of water in France was the highest at 2. 1 dollars per m3, and it was a bit lower in Germany, at 1. 35 dollars. The opposite trend was true for the figure for the US, where water cost only 0. 01 dollars per m3. Due to that cheap price, people in the US used the largest amount of water among five countries. To prove this, it is shown that each American house consumed more than 350 liters of water. In addition, the figures for France and Germany were understandably low. While French households used 250000 m3 of water on average, the result in Germany was around 210 liters. Regarding the remaining datas, the cost of water in Canada and Italy were reasonable, at 0, 31 and 0, 7 dollars per m3 respectively. Therefore, the amount of Italian domestic water used was 300 liters, which was a little lower than the figure for Canada.
The graphs illustrate the
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in five nations in Europe and North America and the price of
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in each country.

It is evident that the cost of
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in the US was the lowest while the
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for Germany and France are by far the highest.
Therefore
, the Americans
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use
the largest
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of
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compared to the remaining nations.

As can be
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from the
first
chart, the price of
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in France was the highest at 2. 1
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dollars
per m3, and it was a bit lower in Germany, at 1. 35
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dollars
. The opposite trend was true for the
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for the US, where
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water
cost
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0. 01
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per m3. Due to that
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cheap
price,
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people
in the US
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the largest
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of
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among five countries. To prove this, it
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that each American
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house
consumed more than 350 liters of
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.
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for France and Germany were
understandably
low. While French households
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used
250000 m3 of
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on average, the result in Germany was around 210 liters.

Regarding the remaining
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datas
, the cost of
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in Canada and Italy were reasonable, at 0, 31 and 0, 7
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dollars
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respectively
.
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, the
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of Italian domestic
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used
was 300 liters, which was a
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lower than the
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for Canada.

IELTS academic The graphs illustrate the amount of household water used in five nations in Europe and North America and the price of water in each country.

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