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The line graph compares three different museums in London in terms of the number of visitors per month over a period of four months.

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The line graph compares three different museums in London in terms of the number of visitors per month over a period of four months. It is clearly from the graph that there were downward trends in the number of visitors in Science Museum and Natural History Museum, while the figures for British museum fluctuated greatly during the given period. We can also see that British Museum was by far the most popular museum in London. In June, there were 600 thousand visitors came to British Museum per month compared to 550 thousand visitors for Natural History Museum and 400 thousand visitors for Science Museum. After one month, the monthly number of visitors to British Museum jumped to the highest point of 750 people, whereas the statistic for both Science Museum and Natural History Museum saw a drop to just over 350 thousand visitors. Looking at the figures for the last two months, the number of visitors to British Museum quickly declined to the lowest point of 500 thousand people before witnessing a recover to 650 thousand of people by the end of September. During the same period, visitors who visited both Science Museum and Natural Museum rose to just over 450 thousand people each.
The line graph compares three
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over a period of four months.

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from the graph that there were downward trends in the
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number
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visitors
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Science
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Natural
History
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Museum
, while the figures for British
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fluctuated
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was by far the most popular
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museum
in London.

In June, there were 600 thousand
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came to British
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per
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compared to 550 thousand
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for
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Natural
History
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and 400 thousand
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Science
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. After one
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, the monthly
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jumped to the highest point of 750
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, whereas the statistic for both
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Science
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over 350 thousand visitors.

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witnessing a recover to 650 thousand of
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end
of September. During the same period,
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visitors
who visited both
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Science
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and
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Natural
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rose to
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IELTS academic The line graph compares three different museums in London in terms of the number of visitors per month over a period of four months.

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