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The bar charts shows the information about well known Instagram account popular ready in the year 2018 to 2021.

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Deepa chat represent the information about well-known Instagram accounts popularity from the year 2018 to 2021. Overall it is clearly visualised that the number of users influences by the Cristiano Ronaldo is at the peak as compared to to others however aII the popular uses was fluctuates. 2018 number of Instagram by the Cristiano Ronaldo was more than hundred million meanwhile both the rock and ariana grande shows a small difference on the of 8 million however kylie Jenner was experience to be touch hundred millions which was low from selena gomez who was 20 million which is more than the hundred millions. On the other hand in 2021 popularity of Instagram his increase and the graph touch more than 300 millions Cristiano Ronaldo who is in the first number shows more famous ality then the others uses however the rock, Arianna grande and Kylie Jenner these three well known people have the equal followers onley up to 250 million for the mall Selena gomez show little bit different from other only of 2 million.
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Deepa
chat represent the information about well-known Instagram accounts popularity from the year 2018 to 2021.
Overall
it is
clearly
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visualised
that the number of users influences by the Cristiano Ronaldo is at the peak as compared
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to to
others
however
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aII
the popular
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uses
was fluctuates. 2018 number of Instagram by the Cristiano Ronaldo was more than
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hundred
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million
meanwhile both the rock and
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ariana grande
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shows
a
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small
difference on the of 8
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million
however
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kylie
Jenner was experience to be touch
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hundred
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millions
which was low from
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selena
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gomez
who was 20
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million
which is more than the hundred
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millions
. On the
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other
hand in 2021 popularity of Instagram his increase and the graph touch more than 300
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millions
Cristiano Ronaldo who is in the
first
number
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shows
more
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famous
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ality
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then
the others
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uses
however
the rock, Arianna
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grande
and Kylie Jenner these three well known
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people
have the equal followers
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onley
up to 250
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million
for the mall Selena
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gomez
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show
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little bit
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