Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The two maps illustrate how changed were done in island during the given period.

The two maps illustrate how changed were done in island during the given period. R0KQo
The two maps illustrate how changed were done in island during the given period. Overall, looking first at the graph we can see, the most dramatic constructions were in west part of the map. Although the island became modern, palm trees were not cut down. As for the main change, in west place of the map, there were erected the same living areas around plams. Then, siwimming place was made in left edge of island. Additionally, different aminities were organized for tourists. Then, restaurant was built in top part of the map and reception was constructed in front of restaurant. In west part of island, there were not changes while, in the center of map, living areas were built in a circle and footpath made for each houses. Finally, in bottom part of island, pier was constructed for boats. Tourist only can go to until restaurant by vehicle track.
The two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
maps
illustrate how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
were done
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
during the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
period.

Overall
, looking
first
at the graph we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
, the most dramatic constructions were in west
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
. Although the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
became modern, palm trees were not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down.

As for the main
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
, in west place of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
, there
were erected
the same living areas around
Possible spelling mistake found.
plams
. Then,
Possible spelling mistake found.
siwimming
place
was made
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
edge of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
.
Additionally
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
Possible spelling mistake found.
aminities
were organized
for tourists. Then, restaurant
was built
in top
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
and reception
was constructed
in front of restaurant.

In west
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, there were not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
while, in the center of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
, living areas
were built
in a circle and footpath made for each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "house"?
houses
.
Finally
, in bottom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, pier
was constructed
for boats. Tourist
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
can go to until restaurant by vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The two maps illustrate how changed were done in island during the given period.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The two maps illustrate how changed were done in island during the given period.