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The provided maps compare the modifications in the Spanish city called Castellon from 2000 till now.

The provided maps compare the modifications in the Spanish city called Castellon from 2000 till now. M3Axk
The provided maps compare the modifications in the Spanish city called Castellon from 2000 till now. Overall, it can be seen that the main change is the construction of some novel shopping malls and recreational buildings. Moreover, the large road is changed to pedestrian only. In 2000, the centre was empty but a scheme has been organized that the bikes which are placed on four sides of city centre can be rented now. Furthermore, a tramline has been built, connecting the university with centre and a hall of residence is erected in the northwest of the map. The train station is demolished to make way for police station, however, it is reconstructed arnd expanded next to police station. Yet, the airport is under construction near the tramline on the east. It is clear that in order to establish a new shopping centre, all of the trees in the northeast needed to be uprooted. There was an old market in the west of the city which is replaced by a new shop and it is reconstructed as a covered market to the other side of the city centre. In addition, the highway which run through the city from the west to the east has been substituted with the pedestrian road. Finally, bars, clubs and cinema are erected to the left and right of the port respectively and no change is made to the university.
The provided maps compare the modifications in the Spanish city called
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Castellon
from 2000 till
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now
.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the main
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change
is the construction of
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some
novel shopping malls and recreational buildings.
Moreover
, the large road is
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changed
to pedestrian
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only
.

In 2000, the
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centre
was empty
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but
a scheme has
been organized
that the bikes which
are placed
on four sides of city
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centre
can
be rented
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now
.
Furthermore
, a
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tramline
has
been built
, connecting the university with
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centre
and a hall of residence
is erected
in the northwest of the map. The train station
is demolished
to
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make
way for police station,
however
, it
is reconstructed
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arnd
expanded
next
to police station.
Yet
, the airport is under construction near the
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tramline
on the east.

It is
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clear
that in order to establish a new shopping
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centre
,
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all of the
trees in the northeast needed to
be uprooted
. There was an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
market in the west of the city which
is replaced
by a new shop and it
is reconstructed
as a covered market to the other side of the city
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centre
.
In addition
, the highway which run through the city from the west to the east has
been substituted
with the pedestrian road.
Finally
, bars, clubs and cinema
are erected
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
and right of the port
respectively
and no
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change
is made
to the university.
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