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The line graph compares the amount of Fish and some different kinds of meat in the European’s meals between 1979 and 200

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The line graph compares the amount of Fish and some different kinds of meat in the European’s meals between 1979 and 200 It’s clear that beef is the favorite food that people ate in 1979, while fish is the lowest consumption’s ones. 1984 witnessed the figure of grams of beef per person per week increased to around 230 grams. From 1984 to 2004, the rate of the consumption of fish has a slight fall, whereas, the amount of beef has a significant decrease to 100g. Meanwhile, the number of chicken and lamb was around 150g at the start. In the next 25 years, European has eaten chicken more than lamb; for example, the amount of chicken rose steadily to 250g, however, the lamb’s ones fell to 50g. In 2004, people in Europe liked to eat chicken most with 250g per person per week. Overall, Fish is a delicious food but it wasn’t eaten too much in Europe compared to the four kinds of food in this group, however, chicken tends to be the favorite food for Europeans.
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ate in 1979, while fish is the lowest consumption’s ones. 1984 witnessed the figure of grams of beef per person per week increased to around 230 grams.

From 1984 to 2004, the rate of the consumption of fish has a slight fall, whereas, the amount of beef has a significant decrease to 100g.

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in Europe liked to eat chicken most with 250g per person per week.

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IELTS academic The line graph compares the amount of Fish and some different kinds of meat in the European’s meals between 1979 and 200

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