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Describe the changes in the map

Describe the changes in the map xa5jg
The given layout plans illustrate the changes to Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and the present day. It can be seen that there are many changes during the period, including new buildings and recreation facilities. First, there were two galleries located in the right side of the area with two separate buildings, whereas now the concert hall is there as it was expanded. The Gallery was moved towards the left of the Art Centre. The concert hall and cinema building was demolished; however, in their place the authorities placed a central exhibition area and also constructed two additional building next to each other for a cinema and a drama studio. What is more, the meeting room was relocated to the left of the drama studio as two separate small rooms instead of one large. When it comes to places for general purposes, the information desk was remained the same location. In addition to that Wasteland area was developed a new recreation area with a stage, trees and outdoor exhibition and performance area. Finally, the toilet was moved to the right side of the area, and it was also decreased in size.
The
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given
layout plans illustrate the
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changes
to Colwick Arts
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Centre
between 2005 and the present day. It can be
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seen
that there are
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many
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changes
during the period, including new
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buildings
and recreation facilities.

First
, there were two galleries located
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in the right side
of the
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area
with two separate
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buildings
, whereas
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now
the concert hall is there as it
was expanded
. The Gallery was
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moved
towards the
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left
of the Art
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Centre
. The concert hall and cinema
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building
was demolished
;
however
, in their place the authorities placed a central exhibition
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area
and
also
constructed two additional
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building
next
to each other for a cinema and a drama studio.
What is more
, the meeting room
was relocated
to the
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left
of the drama studio as two separate
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small
rooms
instead
of one large.

When it
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comes
to places for general purposes, the information desk
was remained
the same location.
In addition
to that Wasteland
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area
was developed
a new recreation
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area
with a stage, trees and outdoor exhibition and performance
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area
.
Finally
, the toilet was
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moved
to the right side of the
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area
, and it was
also
decreased in size.
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IELTS academic Describe the changes in the map

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6.0
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