Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

an art gallery located in Parkinson Court

an art gallery located in Parkinson Court Wq6aq
The provided maps clearly present changes that will take place in an art gallery located in Parkinson Court. Overall, it can be noticeable that the gallery can be subdivided into 3 main areas: the east wing, the center, and the west wing. In the east wing, the lobby and an office are proposed to be replaced by a large education area, along with a storage and plant room. Beside, the entrance in the lobby is planned to be moved to the front of the center area. In the center where a permanent exhibition space and 2 temporary ones are set, a new spacious permanent exhibition hall is sketched to be put in place. Further, a corridor is scheduled to be built in the front of the new permanent hall so that the east wing and the west wing are connected. In the west wing which is not part of the existing gallery, a special roomy exhibition space, together with an exhibition store, is expected to be established.
The provided maps
clearly
present
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that will take place in an art gallery located in Parkinson Court.
Overall
, it can be noticeable that the gallery can
be subdivided
into 3 main areas: the east wing, the center, and the west wing.

In the east wing, the lobby and an office
are proposed
to
be replaced
by a large education area, along with a storage and plant room. Beside, the entrance in the lobby
is planned
to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the front of the center area.

In the center where a permanent exhibition space and 2 temporary ones
are set
, a new spacious permanent exhibition hall
is sketched
to
be put
in place.
Further
, a corridor
is scheduled
to
be built
in the front of the new permanent hall
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the east wing and the west wing
are connected
.

In the west wing which is not part of the existing gallery, a special roomy exhibition space, together with an exhibition store, is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to
be established
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic an art gallery located in Parkinson Court

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    THE BAR CHART SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH CARS IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1971 AND 2001.
    The given bar chart provides information about proportion of cars per families in a European nation over a thirty-year period from 1971 to 2001. It is clear that the numbers of car owners rose in the country over the period shown. Although the percentage of families with one and two or more cars in...
  • 6.5band
    Meat 4 different kind in 1979 to 2004
    The graph illustrates the information about the number of people who was eaten fish and 3 different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. From an overall perspective, what stand out from the graph is that there was considerable upward trend in the income of chicken, whereas the con...
  • 5band
    Shares of expenditure of given categories in some countries
    The table illustrates how much money is spent on four categories in france, german, uk, turkey, spainOverall, the largest proportion of expenditures in each country is food, drinks and housing. On the other hand, clothing and entertainment is the lowest percentage in the given table. In terms of fo...
  • 6band
    THE CHART BELOW GIVE THE INFORMATION ABOUT SOUTHLAND MAIN EXPORTS IN 2005, 2015 AND 2025.
    THE TABLE ACHRT ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF MAIN EXPORTS CATEGORISED IN THREE MAIN PRODUCTS ( MEAT, DAIRY AND INTERNATIONAL TOURISM) BY SOMELAND IN THREE DECADES. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN USD BILLIONS. OVERALL, THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF EXPORTS SHOWS SIMILAR DAIRY AND INTERNATIONAL TOURISM. THE MEATPROD...
  • 5.5band
    Company add expenditure in different media sector
    The table illustrates changes in the percentage of failed organisations in various media sections in Australia, Korea and Brazil. Overall, the largest proportion of advertising expenditures in each country goes on tv. On the other hand, direct mail category is the lowest one in the given table. Aust...
  • 5.5band
    The charts show the value of one country exports of various products and table show the percentage change in each category.
    The chart depicts the sales of one nation export of five different goods and a table containing the percentage of changes of these goods for the period of two years which are 2015 and 2016. Overall, as per the chart, it is clearly visible that the export of Petroleum, . Engineer and Textile products...