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The diagram about nutrients intake

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The charts illustrate the percentage of everyday ingestion of various nutritions that the average person in the United States in each food. The nutrients that are compared in these diagrams are sodium, saturated fat and added sugar. These nutritional elements maybe not be healthy if eaten too much. Overall, it can be seen that the highest percentage of sodium is consumed during dinner and its the highest number among all these nutrients. As per the visualization, it's found that the intake of nutrition during breakfast are negligible. The 42% of added sugar is consumed by the personal with snacks, however, during breakfast and lunch, the consumption of the sweet is less than 20%. On recapitulating, It identified that nutritional elements consumptions are high during dinner time. This may affect their health as well as people's wellness.
The charts illustrate the percentage of everyday ingestion of various
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nutritions
that the average person in the United States in each food. The nutrients that
are compared
in these diagrams are sodium, saturated
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fat
and
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added
sugar. These nutritional elements maybe not be healthy if eaten too much.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the highest percentage of sodium
is consumed
during dinner and
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its
the highest number among all these nutrients. As per the visualization, it's found that the intake of nutrition during breakfast are negligible.

The 42% of
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added
sugar
is consumed
by the personal with snacks,
however
, during breakfast and lunch, the consumption of the sweet is less than 20%.

On recapitulating, It identified that nutritional elements
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consumptions
are high during dinner time. This may affect their health
as well
as
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people
's wellness.
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