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The piechart illustrates the finding of the suvey conducted on tourist who tour in four diffrent tourist spots in United Kingdom during the 1999.

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The piechart illustrates the finding of the suvey conducted on tourist who tour in four diffrent tourist spots in United Kingdom during the year 1999. At an overall glance on the graph, theam parks and Museums and galaries are mostly demanded place by visitors. To begin with the main four tour, Firslty, 38% of people enjoy being in the theam park. Secondly, 37% tourist visit museums and galaries. Moving further, only 16% people cherrsh and wish to spend time in Historic houses and Monuments. Lastly only one out of ten people go to wildlife parks and zoos. On further analysisng the theam park, almost of half of the people's walkin are in Blackpool Pleasure Beach around 47%. Alton Towers and Pleasureland has almost similar number of visits almost 17%. The chessington World and Legoland has around one out of ten visit on an average.
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, 37% tourist visit museums and
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the
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are in Blackpool Pleasure Beach around 47%. Alton Towers and
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IELTS academic The piechart illustrates the finding of the suvey conducted on tourist who tour in four diffrent tourist spots in United Kingdom during the 1999.

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