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The line graph compares percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.

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The line graph compares percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009. It is clear that the proportion of the population who used the Internet increased in each country over the period shown. A much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet in comparison with Mexicans, and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage. In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%. The figure for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population while the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%. On the other hand, the percentage was higher in Canada in the year 2005. Almost 100% of Canadians used the Internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.
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in three countries who
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the Internet between 1999 and 2009. It is
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clear
that the proportion of the population who
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used
the Internet increased in each country over the period shown. A much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet
in comparison
with Mexicans, and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage. In 1999, the proportion of
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people
using the Internet in the USA was about 20%. The figure for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5%
respectively
. In 2005, Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population while the figure for Mexico reached
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over 25%.
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, the percentage was higher in Canada in the year 2005. Almost 100% of Canadians
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used
the Internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and
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only
40% of Mexicans.
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IELTS academic The line graph compares percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.

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6.5
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