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the table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 in three countries

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The table illustrates the information and predictions related to the change in the population of people with age 65 in the years 1988, 2000, and 2030 in Canada, Germany, and the UK. Overall, the highest proportion of people with age 65 is in the year 2030 in all the three countries. The lowest of all were recorded in the year 1988. The percentage was similar for the UK in the years 1988 and 2000. In Canada, 16. 32% of the people out of the overall population were of the age 65 in the year 1988. This number increased by almost 4% after twelve years in the year 2000. There was a considerable rise to 26. 35% in 2030. On the other hand, Germany's population of people with age 65 increased by 5% each year, starting with 20. 45% in 1988 and ending at 30. 42% in 2030. Looking at the UK's data, it is very evident that the population did not see a noticeable growth from 1988 to 2000 and was around 14% in both these years. However, this will not be the case in 2030 as the 65 aged people will grow in number and reach 20. 35% by 2030.
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65 in the years 1988, 2000, and 2030 in Canada, Germany, and the UK.

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2030 in all the three countries. The lowest of all
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1988. The percentage was similar for the UK in the years 1988 and 2000.

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65 in the
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1988. This number increased by almost 4% after twelve years in the
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2000. There was a considerable rise to 26. 35% in 2030.
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, starting with 20. 45% in 1988 and ending at 30. 42% in 2030.

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a noticeable growth from 1988 to 2000 and was around 14% in both these years.
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will grow in number and reach 20. 35% by 2030.
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