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The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. E0mB
The line graph depicts the total number of tourists in percentage who visited England to see art gallery, pavilion, pier and festival in Brighton from 1980 to 2010. Overall, in the beginning of the period art gallery, pavilion and festival were the most visited place in Brighton while this trend was reversed for art galley in the following years and it became the least popular among tourists. It is evident from the given information that one in ten people were visited to pier in 1980 which was having the least popularity among other four attractions. In the next five years, it revealed an increase by 5% and reached at 15% in 1985. After this year, the values had shown various fluctuations for next 25 years and amounted to 20% in 2010. On the contrary, festival was visited by 30% of tourists and remained at similar level till 2010. On the other hand, the trend to visit art gallery and pavilion was decreased with the time. Pavilion, which was the second most commonly visited place by the people in England, accounted for approximately 20% in 1980. This proportion skyrocketed to just below 50% in 1995 and after hitting this highest point it declined by 20%. Similarly, art gallery was seen by about 20% of tourists in the beginning of the year and it doubled in 1985. After 1985, It had shown a downward trend and reached at lesser than 10% of tourists in 2010.
The line graph depicts the total number of
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tourists
in percentage who
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visited
England to
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see
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art
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gallery
,
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pavilion
, pier and festival in Brighton from 1980 to 2010.

Overall
, in the beginning of the period
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art
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gallery
,
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pavilion
and festival were the most
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visited
place in Brighton while this trend
was reversed
for
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art
galley in the following years and it became the least popular among tourists.

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given
information that one in ten
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people
were
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visited
to pier in 1980 which was having the least popularity among other four attractions. In the
next
five years, it revealed an increase by 5% and reached at 15% in 1985. After this
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year
, the values had shown various fluctuations for
next
25 years and amounted to 20% in 2010.
On the contrary
, festival was
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visited
by 30% of
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tourists
and remained at similar level till 2010.

On the other hand
, the trend to visit
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art
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gallery
and
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pavilion
was decreased
with the time.
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Pavilion
, which was the second most
commonly
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visited
place by the
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people
in England, accounted for approximately 20% in 1980. This proportion skyrocketed to
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just
below 50% in 1995 and after hitting this highest point it declined by 20%.
Similarly
,
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art
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gallery
was
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seen
by about 20% of
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tourists
in the beginning of the
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year
and it doubled in 1985. After 1985, It had shown a downward trend and reached at lesser than 10% of
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tourists
in 2010.

IELTS academic The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

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