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The line graph below shows the percentage (%) of houses in Anyland heated by systems using four sources of energy.

The line graph below shows the percentage (%) of houses in Anyland heated by systems using four sources of energy. BgLnj
The line graph illustrates the proportion of people heated by systems using coal, gas, electricity, and solar in Anyland from 1950 to 2030. It can be seen from the line, there was an upward trend in the percentage of using electricity and solar, whereas coal and gas were consumed less than in the majority of the period. Another striking feature is that electrical energy has been becoming dominant than other sources. The statistic for using electrical energy rose sharply to 10 percent in the period of 20 years, starting in 1950, before soaring to 90 % in 1990. However, there was an oscillation of over 95% in the percentage of houses heated by using electricity for systems between 1990 and 2020, followed by a slight drop of approximately 90% in the last decade. Nevertheless, solar was the less consumption in four sources of energy, which bottomed out from 1950 to 1990, then that has been climbing to 10% in 2030. On the other hand, the figure for coal undergone a swift fall of under 10% in 1990, after increased slightly to 73% in 1960. While the proportion of people using gas as a source of energy for warming systems was 30% in 1950, followed by a minimal decrease of 20% then riched a plateau from 1960 to 1980. From that time, people used gas unusually, which declined to an insignificant amount. The most dramatic changes will be seen in 2030, the amount of coal and gas energy will be leveled off.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
people
heated by systems using coal,
gas
, electricity, and solar in
Anyland
from 1950 to 2030.

It can be
seen
from the line, there was an upward trend in the percentage of using electricity and solar, whereas coal and
gas
were consumed
less than in the majority of the period. Another striking feature is that electrical
energy
has been becoming
dominant
than other sources.

The statistic for using electrical
energy
rose
sharply
to 10 percent in the period of 20 years, starting in 1950,
before
soaring to 90 % in 1990.
However
, there was an oscillation of over 95% in the percentage of
houses
heated by using electricity for systems between 1990 and 2020, followed by a slight drop of approximately 90% in the last decade.
Nevertheless
, solar was the less consumption in four sources of
energy
, which bottomed out from 1950 to 1990, then that has been climbing to 10% in 2030.

On the other hand
, the figure for coal undergone a swift fall of under 10% in 1990, after increased
slightly
to 73% in 1960. While the proportion of
people
using
gas
as a source of
energy
for warming systems was 30% in 1950, followed by a minimal decrease of 20% then
riched
a plateau from 1960 to 1980. From that time,
people
used
gas
unusually
, which declined to an insignificant amount. The most dramatic
changes
will be
seen
in 2030, the amount of coal and
gas
energy
will
be leveled
off.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the percentage (%) of houses in Anyland heated by systems using four sources of energy.

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