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The line graph below shows 6 countries and their population from 1945 to 2100

The line graph below shows 6 countries and their population from 1945 to 2100 NyWrm
The line graph focuses on the history and future of the population growth of 6 separated countries over the period of one and a half century, from 1945 to 2100 As can be seen from the graph, the overall trend for the population was upwards. India ended with the highest number of people, followed by China. Over a century period, the figure for Viet Nam and Canada remain insignificant. From 1945 to 2020, China had the highest count of people at 600 million in 1945, while India was second highest at nearly 400 million people. The United States' population was half the figure in India. Over the 75- year period, all figure had witnessed a rise, with China and India had a population just above 1. 4 billion. The figure for the United States was gradually coming closer to the 400 million line; whereas Nigeria quickly increase their figure by 200 million. From 2020 to 2100, China will be overtaken by India, with India becoming the highest in number of residents, whereas, after experiencing a rise for over 75 years, China's population quickly drop by 0. 4 billion. Contrastingly, Nigeria's figure skyrocketed. It is projected that in 2100, Nigeria will have 4 times as much residents as it has now.
The line graph focuses on the history and future of the
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growth of 6 separated countries
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the period of one and a half century, from 1945 to 2100

As can be
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seen
from the graph, the
overall
trend for the
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population
was upwards. India ended with the highest number of
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people
, followed by China.
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Over
a century period, the
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for
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Viet
Nam and Canada remain insignificant.

From 1945 to 2020, China had the highest count of
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people
at 600 million in 1945, while India was second highest at
nearly
400 million
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people
. The United States'
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was half the
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figure
in India.
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Over
the 75- year period, all
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figure
had witnessed a rise, with China and India had a
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population
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just
above 1. 4 billion. The
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figure
for the United States was
gradually
coming closer to the 400 million line; whereas Nigeria
quickly
increase their
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figure
by 200 million.

From 2020 to 2100, China will
be overtaken
by India, with India becoming the
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highest in number
of residents, whereas, after experiencing a rise for
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over
75 years, China's
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quickly
drop by 0. 4 billion.
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Contrastingly
, Nigeria's
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skyrocketed. It
is projected
that in 2100, Nigeria will have 4 times as
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much
residents as it has
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now
.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows 6 countries and their population from 1945 to 2100

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