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The line graph presented indicates the stock prices variation of the best four technologie companies in the world between 2011 and 2016 overall, we can witness facebook stock prices having a huge rise while yahoo experiencing a fall. Apple's stock prices keep on variating thus google's shares are having a period of stability. To Start Facebook prices increased signigicantly from 7500 in the beginning of the year 2011 to reach the peak of 20000 in the year 2016. Contrarily, Yahoo was at rise in the year 2011 with a 7500 price then it progressively declined to reach almost 2000 in the year 2016. With Google being a strong comapny, we can compare it to a plateau. Google prices remained the same at 1000 per share for the whole 6 years period. On the other side, apple prices skyrocket going from 5000 per share to 35000 as the highest price in 1 year only. later that year the price dropped rapidly to 7500 in the year 2013. It recovered slightly in 2014 reaching 12500 then went down dramatically in the year 2016 valuing 5500 per share.
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having a huge rise while yahoo experiencing a fall.

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are having a period of stability.

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Facebook
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2011 to reach the peak of 20000

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2016.
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, Yahoo was at rise in the
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2011 with a 7500
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then it
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2016.

With Google being a strong
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remained the same at 1000 per
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whole 6 years period. On the other side, apple
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skyrocket going from 5000 per
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to 35000 as the highest
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in 1
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2013. It recovered
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