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The given chart illustrates data about proportion of various age levels’ cinema attendance (at least one time per year) in Australia throughout twenty years; from 1990 to 2010.

The given chart illustrates data about proportion of various age levels’ cinema attendance (at least one time per year) in Australia throughout twenty years; from 1990 to 2010. 3LW1J

The given chart represents a numerous data about cinema and its viewers(at least one attendance per year) in various age ranges from 14 to more than 50 years old in Australia from 1990 until the present, with overhanging to 2010 as well. Looking from overall perspective, the portions has mentioned in percentage unit. Additionally all categories has an deep fluctuation during the period in twenty years. However young ages are more keen in attending to cinemas and watching movies in comparison with the senior citizens and it is readily apparent and noticeable that the older ages had been less leaned toward cinema presenting than the other age segments. To commence with, the youngsters (from 14 to 24)had been curious with attending to cinema during the whole period and have reached the peak range in approximately 97%. Secondly, the proportion of elderly crowd peaked at 75% and had a rise in 20% during the period and the next stage was similar with the previous stage in some cases but in 35 to 49 years old segment in readily more oscillation is noticeable likewise it's peak range was around 80% at the end possessing around 20% rise. in regarding with the oldest proportion(50+ years old), not only they are the portion with the least appearance in cinemas but also they had a significant rise during the period around 20% and remain steady during the 2004 to 2010 period.

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 in Australia from 1990 until the present, with overhanging to 2010 as well
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 segments.

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cinema
 during the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 and have reached the peak range in approximately 97%. Secondly
, the proportion of elderly crowd peaked at 75% and had a rise in 20% during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 and the next
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old
 segment in readily
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 possessing around 20% rise.

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), not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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cinemas
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 they had a significant rise during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
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 around 20% and remain steady during the 2004 to 2010 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
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