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The given line graph demonstrates the expenditure of junk foods namely hamburger, fish, chips, and pizza in gram during the five year period from 1970 to 1990.

The given line graph demonstrates the expenditure of junk foods namely hamburger, fish, chips, and pizza in gram during the five year period from 1970 to 1990. YdkYB

The given line graph demonstrates the expenditure of junk foods namely hamburgers, fish, chips, and pizza in gram during the five year period from 1970 to 1990. Overall, it can be clearly seen in the graph that fish and chips hit the highest point; however, the least amount of money spent on pizzas and hamburgers. In 1970, the point of hamburgers was under 100 and rose marginally until 1980 the point was at least 100, whereas the consumption of fishes and chips with around 98 over the two decades then the rate of those junk foods were about 150. Afterward, the expenditure of beef burgers were exactly 100 then climbed gradually which was 1990. Moving further, pizzas had the greatest point (300) which was 1970, then dropped slightly within the three periods the figure was precisely two hundred and then the point had remained steadily. The rate of chips and fishes surged by 150 in 1985, then hit the highest point at the end of the year 500 depicted.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph demonstrates the expenditure of junk foods namely
 hamburgers, fish, chips, and pizza in gram during the When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "five-year"five-year
five year
 period from 1970 to 1990.

Overall
, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the graph that fish and chips hit the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
; however
, the least amount of money spent on pizzas and hamburgers.

In 1970, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 of hamburgers was under 100 and rose marginally
 until 1980 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 was at least 100, whereas the consumption of fishes and chips with around 98 over the two decades then the rate of those junk foods were about 150. Afterward, the expenditure of beef burgers were exactly 100 then climbed gradually
 which was 1990.

Moving further
, pizzas had the greatest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 (300) which was 1970, then dropped slightly
 within the three periods the figure was precisely
 two hundred and then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 had remained steadily
. The rate of chips and fishes surged by 150 in 1985, then hit the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year 500 depicted. 