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The diagram below illustrates the process of generating electricity through a Hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below illustrates the process of generating electricity through a Hydroelectric power station. VY0B6
The diagram below illustrates the process of generating electricity through a Hydroelectric power station. There are various stages are included like dam, generator, turbines and power stations. Overall, Hydroelectric power station performs in two shifts. In day time, power station can be used to generate an electricity, while reversible turbines is operated for pump of water during night shift. It is quite clear from the diagram, at the day time, water flows through high level reservoir from the river. Then, it passes by a dam, which is located between generator and river and it generates electricity through generator in power station. Therefore, power lines go directly to national grid. On the other hand, during at night shift, water flows from low level reservoir through reversible turbines. In addition, it pumps water into high level reservoir and flows back to river. The flow of water through pumping is closed during night time. It is completely a two way process which operates in day and night both time.
The diagram below illustrates the process of generating electricity
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through
a Hydroelectric
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power
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station
. There are various stages
are included
like dam, generator, turbines and
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power
stations.

Overall
, Hydroelectric
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power
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station
performs in two shifts. In day
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time
,
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power
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station
can be
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used
to generate an electricity, while reversible turbines
is operated
for pump of
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water
during
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night
shift.

It is quite
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clear
from the diagram, at the day
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time
,
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water
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flows
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through
high level reservoir from the river. Then, it passes by a dam, which
is located
between generator and river and it generates electricity
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through
generator in
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power
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station
.
Therefore
,
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power
lines go
directly
to national grid.

On the other hand
, during at
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night
shift,
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water
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flows
from low level reservoir
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through
reversible turbines.
In addition
, it pumps
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water
into high level reservoir and
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flows
back to river. The
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flow
of
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water
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through
pumping
is closed
during
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night
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time
. It is completely a
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two way
process which operates in day and
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night
both
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time
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates the process of generating electricity through a Hydroelectric power station.

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