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The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European from 1979 to 2004.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European from 1979 to 2004. xmmW9

The given line graph provides information of people who ate 4 types of meat(chicken, beef, lamb, fish), over a twenty five-years period between 1979 and 2004 in European. Overall, the consumption of 3 kinds of meat decreased over the period in question, with only exception of chicken meat, which significantly went up by 2004. Looking at the details, we can see that the most consumed meat was chicken (140 grams per person per week), which considerably growed to 250 grams by 2004. What we can not say about other meat. For example, beer meat(220), this meat decreased to about 180 grams in then was a little outbreak and beer slightly increased from about 180 to 240, but then halved to about 120 in the end of the period. Almost the same with lamb meet(150grams), that gradually declined to about 70 grams in 2004. And last one fish meet(60 grams), this meet at the beginning of the period was less consumed and over all period was steadily, but slightly dropped to about 50 at the end of period.

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 between 1979 and 2004 in European.

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meat
, which significantly
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grams
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grams
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meet
(150grams), that gradually
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 in 2004.

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