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The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figures for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figures for 2025. yXXor
The given graph compares figures for the manufacture and utilization of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also depicts figures for 2025. overall, we can see U. S consumption rate is approximately 60 units higher than U. S production rate in the upcoming year 2025. To start with, in 1950 the intake increased at a sharp rate and in 2075 faces considerable fluctuation due to transferring some energy units to other countries however, it grew dramatically till 2000. Moreover, it is assumed that it will escalate at the same rate in upcoming 5 years. On the other hand, the U. S source rate tremendously increased till 1975 then varied due to some imports till 2000. whereas, it is predicted that it will rise at substantial rate. All in all, I would say the rate of manufacture is less than the rate of expenditure and there are remarkable increase in BTU's since year 1950 till 2000 and will continue to escalate at the same rate.
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graph compares figures for the manufacture and utilization of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It
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U. S consumption
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is approximately 60 units higher than U. S production
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in the upcoming year 2025.

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with, in 1950 the intake increased at a sharp
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and in 2075 faces considerable fluctuation due to transferring
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energy units to other countries
however
, it grew
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that it will escalate at the same
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rate
in upcoming 5 years.

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tremendously
increased till 1975 then varied due to
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imports till 2000.
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whereas
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is predicted
that it will rise at substantial rate.

All in all, I would say the
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of manufacture is less than the
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of expenditure and there are remarkable increase in BTU's since year 1950 till 2000 and will continue to escalate at the same
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.
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IELTS academic The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figures for 2025.

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