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The diagram below shows how elecricity is generated in hydroelectricity.

The diagram below shows how elecricity is generated in hydroelectricity. AjjV1
From the Given Picture we can see how electricity can be produced by the hydroelectric power station. Overall we can observe that we have several stages in the station like a high-level reservoir, dam, low-level reservoir, power lines, and equipment like generator and turbines. Basically, the water of river enters the high-reservoir through that it enter into water intakes which open in a day and closed at night. There is a gap or a narrow route for water between the power station and high-level reservoir in which the flow of water is done to initiate the electricity. The flow of water is done on solar day and the flow of pumping water done night time. At power station there is a generator and reversible turbines which can flow the water in both the direction. Generator are connected with the powerlines to the national grid. Through the Turbines water pass to the low-level reservoir in a day and pump water into back reverse at the darkness.
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how electricity can
be produced
by the hydroelectric
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power
station.

Overall
we can observe that we have several stages in the station like a high-level
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reservoir
, dam, low-level
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reservoir
,
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power
lines, and equipment like generator and turbines.

Basically
, the
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water
of river enters the high-reservoir through that it enter into
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water
intakes which open in a day and closed at night. There is a gap or a narrow route for
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water
between the
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power
station and high-level
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reservoir
in which the
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flow
of
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water
is done
to initiate the electricity. The
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flow
of
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water
is done
on solar day and the
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flow
of pumping
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water
done
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night time
.

At
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power
station there is a generator and reversible turbines which can
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flow
the
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water
in both the direction. Generator
are connected
with the
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powerlines
to the national grid. Through the Turbines
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water
pass to the low-level
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reservoir
in a day and pump
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water
into back reverse at the darkness.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how elecricity is generated in hydroelectricity.

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