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The bar graph provide informations on the quantity of international graduated students from various provinces of Canada from 2001 to 2006.

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The bar graph provide informations on the quantity of international graduated students from various provinces of Canada from 2001 to 2006. In 2001 the percentage of students gradiated in Canada went from 3% in Ontario to around 7% in New Brunswick. In 2006 we can see that the amount of gradiated students increased, reaching the highest level in New Brunswick. The only exception was Alberta, in which there was a slight decrease, from almost 6% down to just over the 4%. A more detailed look at the graph reveals that the province in which more students graduated in New Brinswick, with a percentage of almost 12. But the highest increase happened in British Columbia, where the bar more than doubled its length, exceeding the 10%, when in 2001 it was just over the 4%. There are also other places where the amount of international gradiated students doubled, like Manitoba, Newfoundland & Labrador and Ontario: in all of them it went from around 3% to almost the 7%. Over this period of time Canada witnessed an overall increase in the number of international graduated students, with New Brunswick remaining at the top of the chart.

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