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The chart below shows the value of the one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the perentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of the one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the perentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. QLLj1
As we can see from the bar chart it shows the importance of a country export in several classifications throughout the years 2015 and 2016. The table is given below describes the switch in each class of exports in the year 2016 in contrast to 2015. In general, we can observe that there are some classes of export first is petroleum products, Engineered goods, Gems and jewellery, agriculture products, and Textiles. Petroleum products are high in both the years, and textiles are at least measured in billions. In the year 2016, Petroleum products are on top by around 63 billion whereas Engineered goods were also increased by around 62 billion in 2015 both the products are quite less by around 61 billion and 58 billion. Moving to the Gems and jewelry export it is good in the year 2015 by around 42 billion and in 2016 it is dropped by around 2 billion. In the field of agriculture products, 2016 export had grown by 1 billion which is almost 31 billion and in textiles also there is a jump of 4 billion that is around 32 billion while in 2015 both categories are low in export.
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are high in both the years, and textiles are at least measured in billions.

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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of the one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the perentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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