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The line graph below shows the average numbers of UK commuters travelling each day by three different means of transportation including cars, buses and trains in the UK between 1970 and 2020.

The line graph below shows the average numbers of UK commuters travelling each day by three different means of transportation including cars, buses and trains in the UK between 1970 and 2020. x0N9w
The given line graph illustrates the average number of UK commuters, who usually use cars, buses, trains for work every day in the UK from 1970 to 2020. Overall, it is obvious that cars were the most common mean of transport. Furthermore, while the number of people in the UK usually traveling by cars and trains increased over the period shown, buses witnessed the opposite trend. The average number of UK commuters traveling by cars witnessed stability at over 5 million, which was 3 million higher than the one of UK people who used trains for work between 1970 and 1980. In 2000, there was a dramatic rise in the number of people traveling each day by cars and trains at 7 and 3 million, respectively. In the next 10 years, the figure for buses was still decreased to over 3 million, whereas the number of commuters traveling by cars and trains every day reached a plateau. The figure for people traveling by trains and buses on a daily was cross each other at 3. 5 million over period 10 years, starting from 2010. In 2030, the number of people traveling by trains was rose sharply to 5 million, but the opposite was true for buses at 3 million. The average number of UK commuters traveling each day by cars experienced a gradual rise to 8 million in 2020 followed by a substantial rise of 1 million in 2030.
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, buses,
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for work every day in the UK from 1970 to 2020.

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witnessed stability at
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higher than the one of UK
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for work between 1970 and 1980. In 2000, there was a dramatic rise in the
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every day reached a plateau.

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and buses on a daily was cross each other at 3. 5
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traveling each day by
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experienced a gradual rise to 8
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million
in 2020 followed by a substantial rise of 1
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in 2030.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the average numbers of UK commuters travelling each day by three different means of transportation including cars, buses and trains in the UK between 1970 and 2020.

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