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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000 eX0K

the line graph shows the number of children who eat junk food in Australian in 1975 to 2000. Overall, Fish and Chips is peaked, followed by Hamburgers which is second of the graph and Pizza is lowest in 1975. In 2000, hamburger is highest and Fish and Chips, it became lowest in the graph. Fish and Chips is most popular food at 100 in 1975, It is highest from 1975 to 1985, after 1985, it decreased sharply to just lower than 40 until 2000. Hamburger started at about 10 in 1975, it went up rapidly to just over 80 in 1985, it is a steady increase from 1985 to 2000, it became peak in 2000 at about 100.

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 line graph This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 the number of children who eat junk food in Australian in 1975 to 2000.

Overall
, Fish and Chips is peaked
, followed by Hamburgers which is second of the graph and Pizza is lowest in 1975. In 2000, hamburger is highest and Fish and Chips, it became lowest in the graph.

Fish and Chips is Did you mean "the most"?the most
most
 popular food at 100 in 1975, It is highest from 1975 to 1985, after 1985, it decreased sharply
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 lower than 40 until 2000. Hamburger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at about 10 in 1975, it went up rapidly
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 80 in 1985, it is a steady increase from 1985 to 2000, it became peak in 2000 at about 100. 

IELTS academic The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

Academic

American English

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118 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

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