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The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. wAVq
The tables and pie chart provide the proportion of customers' levels of expression about a new shopping centre in Auckland, New Zealand. Overall, there are three aspects that are taken into this survey which are shops, restaurants and the design. Although some shoppers are dissatisfied, the shopping complex received many positive ratings. In detail, women enjoys shops more than men with a proportion of 71% against 62%, including both very satisfied and satisfied only. In contrast, the percentage of pleased male customers in restaurants dominants that of female shoppers, with 80% and 59%, respectively. The level of unpleasure in women about restaurants is also around 4 times higher than the level of dissatisfaction in men, while it is equal in shops, with 20% sharp. There are 33% of men and 29% of women give zero comment about neither the two aspects. The pie chart illustrates the overwhelming percentage of 62% of extremely satisfied in both genders regarding to the design of the complex, while 17% are just satisfied. The remaining 21% are categorized into satisfaction and having no comment for the complex.
The tables and pie chart provide the proportion of customers' levels of expression about a new shopping
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centre
in Auckland, New Zealand.
Overall
, there are three aspects that
are taken
into this survey which are shops, restaurants and the design. Although
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some
shoppers
are dissatisfied
, the shopping complex received
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many
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positive
ratings. In detail, women enjoys shops more than
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men
with a proportion of 71% against 62%, including both
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very
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satisfied
and
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satisfied
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only
.
In contrast
, the percentage of
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pleased
male customers in restaurants dominants that of female shoppers, with 80% and 59%,
respectively
. The level of
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unpleasure
in women about restaurants is
also
around 4 times higher than the level of dissatisfaction in
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men
, while it is equal in shops, with 20% sharp. There are 33% of
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men
and 29% of women give zero comment about neither the two aspects. The pie chart illustrates the overwhelming percentage of 62% of
extremely
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satisfied
in both genders
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regarding to
the design of the complex, while 17% are
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just
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satisfied
. The remaining 21%
are categorized
into satisfaction and having no comment for the complex.
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IELTS academic The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

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