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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused DJ97
The illustration demonstrates the process of recycling rainwater for domestic purposes. Overall, this is a cyclical natural process which consists of various steps. The procedure in every step is proceeded by both modern and rudimental steps. When the rain falls, dams and streams are filled with water which then is pumped into the water treatment plant, where it is purified to become portable water. Subsequently, when the water is treated to a level that meet the consumption standard, it is transferred to households for many reasons, such as drinking, cooking, watering plants and other cleansing tasks. Instead of draining away the used water, it is handled by the wastewater treatment plant so as to recycle and be fit for human consumption, again. The excess treated water flows back to the river runoff to complete the cycle. Residents can make their own water source by storing the rainwater falling on the gutter in a tank. Although this source cannot be drunk, it can be utilized for other house chores. Rainwater that falls to the ground is sent via stormwater treatment to the river.
The illustration demonstrates the process of recycling rainwater for domestic purposes.
Overall
, this is a cyclical natural process which consists of various steps. The procedure in every step
is proceeded
by both modern and
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rudimental
steps. When the rain falls, dams and streams
are filled
with
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water
which then
is pumped
into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
treatment plant, where it
is purified
to become portable
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water
.
Subsequently
, when the
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water
is treated
to a level that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the consumption standard, it
is transferred
to households for
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many
reasons, such as drinking, cooking, watering plants and other cleansing tasks.
Instead
of draining away the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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water
, it
is handled
by the wastewater treatment plant
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
recycle and
be fit
for human consumption, again. The excess treated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
flows back to the river runoff to complete the cycle. Residents can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
source by storing the rainwater falling on the gutter in a tank. Although this source cannot
be drunk
, it can
be utilized
for other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
chores. Rainwater that falls to the ground is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
via stormwater treatment to the river.

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