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This table illustrates how many people used three important airports in the UK between 1998 and 2003.

This table illustrates how many people used three important airports in the UK between 1998 and 2003. keOjK
This table illustrates how many people used three important airports in the UK between 1998 and 2003. The numbers are given in million. Overall there was a steady growth in the numbers of all three airports visitors until 2000; however, it is striking that one of the top 3 major and important airports of UK, Heathrow, experienced some falls and the other one, Stansted, leveled off at a certain point after 2000 without any important changes in numbers. To begin with, looking at Heathrow airport visitors, there was a gradual increase in numbers starting from 27. 2 million in 1998 to 48. 2 million in 2000. Then the figure plummeted by 15 million until 2002 but it regained its visitors and the numbers rose to 45. 6 million after a year. As regards Gatwick and Stansted, they both continued growing gradually in the number of visitors. Gatwick started from 36. 5 million in 1998 hit the peak at 69. 3 million in 2003 which is the highest of all other two airports while Stansted visitors rose from 17. 3 million in 1998 to 39. 9 million in 2000 then leveled off at 43. 3 million 2001 until to years later. The interesting point is that Stansted had the highest rate of growth of all three in the first 4 years of the period.
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