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Population of turtle in india

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The table illustrates the percentile of money spent in the adulthood as well as in childhood by the UK People in the respective year 1998. In women, adults and men most usually purchased thing was food; that was highly consumed by the female about 39% followed by 25% and 14% respectively. Whilst, electronic games was quite purchased by males and females are least intrested. They barely spend their 0. 5% to 1% income on video games. For music, all had the same propotion of income utilizing trend. On the contrary, children including boys and girls mostly expenditure was done on video games that showed 12 to 17% more intrest than adults. Whereas, food was their least choiced. Music was dramatically popular among them. Electroinc equipment was mostly acceptable in their life by adults followed by boys and girlsTo recapitaluate the fact adults found food was their main choice. However in childhood, they were more fascinating towards the fancy items like video games, music and electronic equipments.

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