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The charts describes the reasons for travelling and major issues faced by the the public of USA in 2009

The charts describes the reasons for travelling and major issues faced by the the public of USA in 2009 AgG7n

The bar chart illustrates the data about factors for commuting whereas, a pie chart displays the information about hurdles individual faced while travelling in the USA during 2009. Overall, it is clearly seen that informal chat in 2009 crowd of USA was travelling mostly to reach and come back from their workplace and major issue they interact was cost of travelling was relatively high. Looking at the bar graph, it seems that only 6% of denizens used to travel to meet their friends and relatives. On the flip side 4% more than it people commute for a social or recreational gatherings. Apart from it, individuals who used to go out for shopping and personal reason was 16 and 19% respectively. Probing further to pie chart, issues faced by public during travelling in year 2009. A bigger slice of pie chart was occupied by a price of travel 36%. There was a minimal difference of percentage between issue of safety concerns and aggressive drivers. Traffic was stated at the fourth rank among other problem and its proportion was roughly 14%. Moving towards next issue difficulty to get public transport was at 8%. Last, issue faced by masses of USA at least level was space for pedestrians.

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issues
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 of safety concerns and aggressive drivers. Traffic was stated
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