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Describe changes between two diagrams

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Acording to two maps, there were striking changes over the period of 9 years in Landside. The sections which remained unchanged were the Residential area on the top left and the school at the center. However, the Derelic warehouse on the Northside, the Art center on the Westside and the Residential area was in close proximity to the south of the school were removed in favor of the Car park, the Cinema and the Shopping Center respectively. Moreover, the emergence of the Offices and the University made the Old Town disappear in 2009. The year 2000 witnessed a diminution of the lake in the source of the river to a pond for some reasons. An additional changes on the right-hand corner of the lakeside was. The extension of the Industrial complex to the southeast, also occupying the Residential area which used to be situated.
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Acording
to two maps, there were striking
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changes
over the period of 9 years in
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Landside
.

The sections which remained unchanged were the Residential area on the top
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left
and the school at the center.
However
, the
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Derelic
warehouse on the Northside, the Art center on the Westside and the Residential area was in
Consider using "proximity".
close proximity
to the south of the school
were removed
in favor of the Car park, the Cinema and the Shopping Center
respectively
.
Moreover
, the emergence of the Offices and the University made the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Old
Town disappear in 2009.

The year 2000 witnessed a diminution of the lake in the source of the river to a pond for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reasons. An additional
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changes
on the right-hand corner of the lakeside was. The extension of the Industrial complex to the southeast,
also
occupying the Residential area which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
be situated
.
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