Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Stock value of 4 companies

Stock value of 4 companies lRoro

The line graph gives information about the stock value of Apple, Google, Facebook and Yahoo from 2011 to 2016. Overall, the stock price of Facebook increased steadily, in contrast Yahoo stocks saw a relative decline in value, meanwhile Google’s stock prices remained stable, however Apple stock prices fluctuated immensely. The stock prices of both Facebook and Yahoo started at almost 7500 in 2011, however the market stock value increased continuously for Facebook while declining steadily for Yahoo in the following five years. Ultimately, Facebook stocks were worth nearly 20000 meanwhile Yahoo stocks were valued less than 2500 in 2016. Google’s stock was worth almost 1000 in 2011 and it was maintained in the upcoming five year period, however Apple’s stock price, which was valued 5000 in 2011, increased seven times to reach 35000 in 2012, falling suddenly to approximately 7000, fluctuating afterwards until it was finally valued nearly 5500 in 2016.

The line graph gives information about the stock value of Apple, Google, Facebook and Yahoo from 2011 to 2016.

Overall
, the stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 of Facebook increased steadily
, in contrast
 Yahoo stocks This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a relative decline in value, meanwhile Google’s stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 remained stable, however
 Apple stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 fluctuated immensely
.

The stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 of both Facebook and Yahoo This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at almost 7500 in 2011, however
 the market stock value increased continuously
 for Facebook while declining steadily
 for Yahoo in the following five years. Ultimately
, Facebook stocks were worth nearly
 20000 meanwhile Yahoo stocks were valued
 less than 2500 in 2016.

Google’s stock was worth almost 1000 in 2011 and it was maintained
 in the upcoming When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "five-year"five-year
five year
 period, however
 Apple’s stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
, which was valued
 5000 in 2011, increased seven times to reach 35000 in 2012, falling suddenly
 to approximately 7000, fluctuating afterwards until it was finally
 valued nearly
 5500 in 2016. 