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The line graph below describes rainfall statistics for Some Country.

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The line graph gives information about the rainfall in different countries the data given in mm Overall it can be seen highest rainfall in October month in all over yearTo Start with Jan to Feb rainfall is dramatically dro around 10 mm Also Feb to Jan gradually increase the rainfall amount in 2004. Moreover Jan to jul second highest position in the year afto on month slightly decrease almost 51 mm rainfall not on the other hand sep to Oct rapidly rise and archive first position in 2004 rainfall in addition Oct to Dec slowly decrease around 50mm
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