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The table illustrates the system of underground railways in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles).

The table illustrates the system of underground railways in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles). 9D8j
The table illustrates the system of underground railways in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles). Overall, Tokyo is the busiest underground railways whereas the people of Kyoto least preferred this mode of transport. London is the one that constructed the underground railway system in 1863, having a route of 394 km. 775 million commuters used this route every year. Followed by the Paris that developed it in 1900, covering a distance of 199 km and 1191 million people use this mode of transport. Recently, in 2001 Los Angeles has developed the underground railway which is used by 50 million travelers and covers 28 km of the city. Tokyo is the most occupied underground railways, built-in 1927 which accommodates 1927 million passengers per year, whereas people of Kyoto least preferred this mode of transport, carrying only 45 million commuters yearly, covers 11 km of the town.
The table illustrates the system of
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in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles).

Overall
, Tokyo is the busiest
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underground
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railways
whereas the
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people
of Kyoto least preferred this mode of transport.

London is the one that constructed the
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railway
system in 1863, having a route of 394 km. 775
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million
commuters
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used
this route every year. Followed by the Paris that developed it in 1900, covering a distance of 199 km and 1191
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million
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people
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use
this mode of transport. Recently, in 2001 Los Angeles has developed the
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which is
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used
by 50
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travelers and covers 28 km of the city.

Tokyo is the most occupied
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, built-in 1927 which accommodates 1927
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million
passengers per year, whereas
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people
of Kyoto least preferred this mode of transport, carrying
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only
45
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commuters yearly, covers 11 km of the town.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the system of underground railways in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles).

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