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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The ethanol fuel production is a multistep process that see corn as the main character. First of all, In order to produce ethanol fuel, corn has to stored and milled. After that, the addition of water allows the process of cooking, which will take up to 4 hours. A key step of the ethanol fuel production is, without doubt, the process of fermantation. Indeed, corn fermantation is a chemical process 48 hours-long and it takes place in an high-controlled environment in terms of temperature and microorganisms involved. When the whole corn mass is properly fermented, the separation of the solid phase from the liquid one is required for the further steps. In fact, the latter phase will be the only one interested in the purification process. Eventually, after 5 hours we will obtain the final product which will be stored and then transported for the distribution on the local territories.

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