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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity VR1K
The diagram provides information about the production of electricity using geothermal energy. There are several stages in the production process that begin with pumping down cold water into geothermal zone and ending in transferring electricity via power line. In the initial phase of the production, cold water is pumped to 4. 5 km underground through the injection well. Next, the water is injected into the geothermal zone where hot rocks heat the water. After the hot rocks has been heated up, it enters production well and the hot water is pumped up to the ground and into the condenser. Afterwards, the hot water is converted to steam which then flows into a chamber containing a turbine. Next, the turbine is powered by the steam that passes through and begin to spin. From there on, the generator which is powered by the turbine starts to produce electricity. Finally, the electricity is transferred into the electric grid by using power lines.
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production
of
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electricity
using geothermal energy. There are several stages in the
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production
process that
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begin
with pumping down
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cold
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water
into geothermal zone and ending in transferring
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electricity
via power line.

In the initial phase of the
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production
,
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cold
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water
is pumped
to 4. 5 km underground through the injection well.
Next
, the
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water
is injected
into the geothermal zone where hot rocks heat the
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water
. After the hot rocks has
been heated
up, it enters
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production
well and the hot
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water
is pumped
up to the ground and into the condenser.

Afterwards, the hot
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water
is converted
to steam which then flows into a chamber containing a turbine.
Next
, the turbine
is powered
by the steam that passes through and
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begin
to spin. From there on, the generator which
is powered
by the turbine
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starts
to produce
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electricity
.
Finally
, the
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electricity
is transferred
into the electric grid by using power lines.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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