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The chart below shows the trends in car production in three different countries over a ten year period to 1981.

The chart below shows the trends in car production in three different countries over a ten year period to 1981. JNDB

The bar graph illustrates number of car manufactured in the UK, Japan and the USA decade from 1971. USA produced the highest number of cars whereas the UK manufactured lowest number of cars. Finally, USA manufactured the largest number of cars, it gradually increased but fluctuated from the following years by 1979 and declined from 1980 upto the end. Japan produced the some of more number of cars than the UK at the start but it increased slowly by 1974 and stable on between of two years ( 1975 to 1976 years respectively) whereas it declined by 1981. The UK produced half of the number of cars than Japan at the start but increased slightly on between, decreased slightly on the following years by 1977 and declined upto the end by 1981. Finally, USA produced the largest number of cars but Japan produced somehow more than the UK and UK manufactured the lowest number of cars.

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