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The graph below gives information about how people in the United Kingdom spend their income.

The graph below gives information about how people in the United Kingdom spend their income. m2LX8

The data shown in the bar graph represents how income were spent on food, education and entertainment from the citizens of the UK, who were divided into three economical classes. The information has been Calibrated in percentage. To begin with, food is the basic essential need of every living being. The poorest citizens spent 70 percent income on their daily bread. Spending on food decreased gradually among the middle section's people, around of 40%. The rich national were spending only 1/5 of their income. Turning to the next category, poor population were preferred to spend less on education of about 10%, however, middle class citizens spent around 30% of their earnings. Whereas, wealthy beings of UK invested 20% of their income on education.

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