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The line graph and bar chart illustrate the amount of international migration in the UK in 10 years periods from 1990 to 2008. Units are measured in thousands.

The line graph and bar chart illustrate the amount of international migration in the UK in 10 years periods from 1990 to 2008. Units are measured in thousands. nd08g

The line graph and bar chart illustrate the amount of international migration in the UK in 10 years periods from 1990 to 2008. Units are measured in thousands. Overall, it can be seen that the number of immigration and emigration were increased, but immigration rate were significantly higher through out the given period. The total of long -term international migration was fluctuated, it was peaked in 2004 and 2007. It is noticeable that at the beginning the amount of immigrate was around 450 thousand. Whereas, emigrate was only at the approximately 300 thousand. Both immigration and emigration rates continuous to rose by the end of the period (2008), immigration comprise almost 600 thousand people, while emigration rate increase to the same level of the first year of the immigration rate at 450 thousand. The terms of the total migration from 1999-2003 the total number were accounted over 100 thousand but not exceed 200 thousand. As in the year of 2004 the number reached a peak at over 250 thousand. The average of the remaining years were at 200 thousands.

The line graph and bar chart illustrate the amount of international migration in the UK in 10 years periods from 1990 to 2008. Units are measured
 in thousands.

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seen
 that the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtravelexodusmigration
immigration
 and emigration were increased
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but
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immigration
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rate
 were significantly
 higher Did you mean "throughout"?throughout
through out
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given
 period. The total of long -term international migration was fluctuated
, it was peaked
 in 2004 and 2007.

It is noticeable that at the beginning the amount of immigrate was around 450 thousand. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
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only
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immigration
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rates
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end
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immigration
 comprise almost 600 thousand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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rate
 increase to the same level of the first
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year
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtravelexodusmigration
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 at 450 thousand.

The terms of the total migration from 1999-2003 the total number were accounted
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but
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As
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 of 2004 the number reached a peak at over 250 thousand. The average of the remaining years were at 200 thousands. 