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The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and other different kinds of meat consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2005.

The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and other different kinds of meat consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2005. WYGQN
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and other different kinds of meat consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2005. Overall, it is clear that there was a downward trend in the consumption of fish, lamb and beef, while an increasing trend was seen in the amount of chicken consumed. Another outstanding point is that the figure of chicken surpassed that of beef, making chicken become the most consumed type of meat from 1989 onwards. In 1979, the intake of chicken started at approximately 150 grams per person per week, after which it witnessed a dramatic rise to 250 grams per person per week in 2004. Although starting at the highest point, the beef’s figure decreased from 210 grams to about 110 grams at the end of the period. Turning to the fish, approximately 53 grams of fish was consumed per person per week in 1979 and dropped to 49 grams in 2004. Similarly, the consumption of lamb fluctuated in the range from 150 grams to 147 grams between 1979 and 1989 before ending the period at around 54%
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and other
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in a European nation from 1979 to 2005.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there was a downward trend in the consumption of fish, lamb and beef, while an increasing trend was
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in the amount of chicken
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. Another outstanding point is that the figure of chicken surpassed that of beef, making chicken become the most
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type of meat from 1989 onwards.

In 1979, the intake of chicken
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at approximately 150
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grams
per person per week, after which it witnessed a dramatic rise to 250
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grams
per person per week in 2004. Although starting at the highest point, the beef’s figure decreased from 210
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grams
to about 110
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at the
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end
of the period.

Turning to the fish, approximately 53
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of fish was
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per person per week in 1979 and dropped to 49
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in 2004.
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, the consumption of lamb fluctuated in the range from 150
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grams
to 147
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grams
between 1979 and 1989
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ending the period at around 54%
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and other different kinds of meat consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2005.

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