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The line details information about people living in Australia.

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The given line chart depicts the comparison between the inhabitants lived in distinct countries between 1976 and 2011. From an overall prospective, the proportion of population in total nations were inclined drastically in a fluctuated manner; the per centum of UK dwellers were declined sharply. As apparent from the diagram, the rate of English and total countries populace was decreased substantially by 4% and 6%, respectively. However, there had been gradual incline in total nations inhabitants from approximately two fifths to 24%; in 1986 to 2011, the UK population was dropped rapidly from 10 million to 5 million. It is further clear that Asia occupied 6 million dwellers in 1976 and this number was rose sharply by 7% till 2006; yet, from 1976 to 1991, the other countries population had inclined steadily by 2%. Only 4 million rate of population was increased in 5 years in Asia. In other countries the populace had dipped slowly from 14 million to 13 million in 2006 to 2011.
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line chart depicts the comparison between the inhabitants
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lived
in distinct
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countries
between 1976 and 2011.

From an
overall
prospective, the proportion of
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population
in total nations
were inclined
drastically
in a fluctuated manner; the per centum of UK dwellers
were declined
sharply
.

As apparent from the diagram, the rate of English and total
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countries
populace
was decreased
substantially
by 4% and 6%,
respectively
.
However
, there had been gradual incline in total nations inhabitants from approximately two fifths to 24%; in 1986 to 2011, the UK
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population
was dropped
rapidly
from 10
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million
to 5 million.

It is
further
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clear
that Asia occupied 6
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million
dwellers in 1976 and this number was rose
sharply
by 7% till 2006;
yet
, from 1976 to 1991, the other
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countries
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population
had inclined
steadily
by 2%.
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Only
4
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million
rate of
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population
was increased
in 5 years in Asia. In other
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countries
the populace had dipped
slowly
from 14
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million
to 13
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million
in 2006 to 2011.
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