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Britain people contribution to charity

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The bar chart shown details the age range of British people giving money to charity in the years 1990 and 2010. On the horizontal axis different age group bins are mentioned and the vertical axis values the percentage of people. The orange and dark green coloured bars represent the percentages in the years 1990 and 2010 respectively. In 1990, almost 45 percent of people in age group 36-50 contributed towards charity, and the minimum percent value from smaller age group 18-25. By 2010, 36-50 aged people's percentage contribution dropped by more than 5 percent and is next to the 51-65 age bin which has the highest proportion value. The fraction of people from age group 18-25 stays in the last position with further abrupt drop by 2010. Overall, the percentage of people from 50 plus age group gave more money to charity by 2010 whereas the younger people's fraction has decreased drastically.
The bar chart shown
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range of British
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giving money to charity in the years 1990 and 2010. On the horizontal axis
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different
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age
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bins
are mentioned
and the vertical axis values the
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percentage
of
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people
. The orange and dark green
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coloured
bars represent the
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percentages
in the years 1990 and 2010
respectively
.

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people
in
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age
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36-50 contributed towards charity, and the minimum percent value from smaller
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age
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18-25. By 2010, 36-50 aged
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people
's
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contribution dropped by more than 5 percent and is
next
to the 51-65
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age
bin which has the highest proportion value. The fraction of
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people
from
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age
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18-25 stays in the last position with
further
abrupt drop by 2010.

Overall
, the
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percentage
of
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people
from 50 plus
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age
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gave more money to charity by 2010 whereas the younger
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people
's fraction has decreased
drastically
.
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IELTS academic Britain people contribution to charity

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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