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The City Hospital Map in 2008 and 2010

The City Hospital Map in 2008 and 2010 x0Mx9

These two figures illustrate a comparison between the city hospital maps in two different years. Although the ring road surrounding the hospital remained the same, there have been many changes in the layout of the parking lots for both the public and staff. First of all, they seprated the staff car park from the public, which was a good decision. I guess the new public car park makes drop-offs and pick-ups easier for the patients. As it shows, they have located a bus station near the city hospital. Therefore, the hospital is more accessible for the people who use public transportations. The new additional roundabouts on the north and south side of the bus station have made the roads even more convinient. Overall, they have considerably improved the access to the hospital in 2010.

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